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Have you ever regretted eating something after finishing it?

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There are so many oily foods in the world. Fried chicken, Pork cutlet, etc. Sometimes I want to have oily food. After eating oily food, I get a stomachache. One day, I had company dinner. We planned to eat fried chicken. After the dinner, I got a stomachache. Because I had pork cutlet for lunch that day. When I was eating fried chicken, I could feel that my stomach wasn't feeling good. I didn't want to ruin the mood. Finally, I had to see a doctor.

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Good evening, Hwanny!

Individuals may repress their own interests, ideas, or behaviors in order to conform to group norms and develop social ties.
It is acceptable if it does not affect you in any manner, but it is unacceptable if it may do you harm.

Thank you for finding time to answer your homework. I have read it well.

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There are so many oily foods in the world. Fried chicken, Pork cutlet, etc.
>>> There are so many oily foods in the world, like fried chicken, pork cutlet, etc.
Sometimes I want to have oily food. After eating oily food, I get a stomachache.
>>> Sometimes I want to have oily food, but after eating oily food, I get a stomachache.
>>> OR: I occasionally crave oily foods, yet consuming them causes me to experience stomachaches.
One day, I had company dinner. We planned to eat fried chicken.
>>> One day, I had a company dinner. We planned to eat fried chicken.
After the dinner, I got a stomachache. Because I had pork cutlet for lunch that day. When I was eating fried chicken, I could feel that my stomach wasn't feeling good.
>>> After the dinner, I got a stomachache. Because I had pork cutlet for lunch that day, when I was eating fried chicken, I sensed that something wasn't right with my stomach.
I didn't want to ruin the mood. 
>>> CORRECT
Finally, I had to see a doctor.
>>> In the end, I went to see a doctor.
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