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I would like to change the education system of only focusing on getting good score on KSAT. The contents of KSAT do not deal with the subjects deeply. The questions on the test are being peculiar to make students to get wrong so that it is possible to rank students by their scores. Therefore education to let students receive high scores on KSAT is also not well structured.
For Korea's development in the future, education should address more complicated and profound aspects of each subject. Education in depth will make it possible for students to find their true interests and receive optimal education that align with that.

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Hello, Ms. WooIn! That¡¯s a really interesting perspective. It¡¯s true, focusing only on KSAT scores can hold students back from truly understanding subjects. A deeper, more meaningful education could really help students grow in the long run.
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I would like to change the education system of only focusing on getting good score on KSAT. 
>>I would like to change the education system that focuses only on getting a high score on the KSAT.
The contents of KSAT do not deal with the subjects deeply. 
>>The contents of the KSAT do not cover subjects in depth.
The questions on the test are being peculiar to make students to get wrong so that it is possible to rank students by their scores. 
>>The questions are often designed in a tricky way to make students get them wrong, so it's easier to rank them by score.
Therefore education to let students receive high scores on KSAT is also not well structured.
>>As a result, the education aimed at helping students succeed on the KSAT is also poorly structured.
For Korea's development in the future, education should address more complicated and profound aspects of each subject. 
>>For Korea¡¯s future development, education should explore more complex and profound aspects of each subject.
Education in depth will make it possible for students to find their true interests and receive optimal education that align with that.
>>In-depth learning can help students discover their true interests and receive an education that aligns with them.
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