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I prefer nature spots because they are beautiful and we can get nice photos in those spots. Even if we don't know their languages or their cultures, nature always make us feel good.
And I don't really like historical places because they are boring and I don't know their history.

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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
Yes, nature really hits different. 
_T. SHAY^^
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I prefer nature spots because they are beautiful and we can get nice photos in those spots. 
>>Correct
OR: Nature spots are my favorite because they are scenic and perfect for photos.
Even if we don't know their languages or their cultures, nature always make us feel good.
>>Correct
OR: Even without understanding their language or culture, we can still feel the comfort of nature.

And I don't really like historical places because they are boring and I don't know their history.
>>Correct
OR: To be honest, historical sites don't appeal to me--I don't know much about their history, so they feel boring.


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