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What do you enjoy most about your job?

작성자: 정*영
2025-07-22 3

회원님의 영작문

When I saw the essay topic first time, I have time to consider for this issue.
Recently I think about this issue for job applying becuase many company ask me for distinguishing the person more harmony than other condidates. In my case I ususally said that internation sales field I knew when I was university 3rd grade, at that time one professor taught me trade, then I was very interested that, and i thought that my major is English, so It was helpful and very related between. After then, I started learning trade, and It was very fun. I learned about the theory from university and about real practice from company. It was facsinating to see to occur actal trade for my working and the people I met and contact diverse is also attractive for me. Sometime I get through hard work when I commited to speak English fluently or do the reference call, I am dissapointed however, I always don't give up and strrugle to these task. I wish someday speak fluently in my company.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Gloria 🌿

Thank you for sharing your story. I can see how deeply you care about your work and how much effort you've put into your path. Your passion for international sales shines through, and I truly admire the way you’ve connected your major in English with real-world trade experience. That takes both insight and dedication.

Even though the job search has been long, I want you to know—you’re doing everything right. You're learning, reflecting, and showing resilience. That alone already makes you stand out. You don’t give up easily, and that strength will lead you to the right place, at the right time.

Here’s a quote I thought of for you:

“She remembered who she was, and the game changed.” — Lalah Delia

You are capable, you are experienced, and you are valuable. Keep going, Gloria. The right opportunity is making its way to you. You’re already becoming the professional you’ve dreamed of.

With support and belief in you,

~Teacher Cathy

 

When I saw the essay topic first time, I have time to consider for this issue.

>>When I first saw the essay topic, I had time to consider the issue.

Recently I think about this issue for job applying becuase many company ask me for distinguishing the person more harmony than other condidates.

>>Recently, I’ve been thinking about this issue because many companies ask me to demonstrate that I can work more harmoniously than other candidates.

In my case I ususally said that internation sales field I knew when I was university 3rd grade, at that time one professor taught me trade, then I was very interested that, and i thought that my major is English, so It was helpful and very related between.

>>In my case, I usually say that I first learned about the international sales field when I was in my third year of university. At that time, one of my professors taught me about trade, which I found very interesting. Since my major was English, I thought it would be helpful and closely related.

After then, I started learning trade, and It was very fun.

>>After that, I started learning about trade, and it was a lot of fun.

I learned about the theory from university and about real practice from company.

>>I learned the theoretical aspects at university and gained practical experience at the company.

It was facsinating to see to occur actal trade for my working and the people I met and contact diverse is also attractive for me.

>>It was fascinating to see actual trade take place in my work, and I also found it attractive to meet and interact with a diverse range of people.

Sometime I get through hard work when I commited to speak English fluently or do the reference call, I am dissapointed however, I always don't give up and strrugle to these task.

>>Sometimes I struggle with challenging tasks, such as speaking English fluently or making reference calls. Although I feel disappointed at times, I never give up and keep working hard to overcome these challenges.

I wish someday speak fluently in my company.

>>I hope to speak English fluently at my company someday.

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