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I like to drink coffee. A type of my favorite coffee is drip coffee. My favorite coffee bean is Ethiopian because of unique taste. Drip coffee smells good. I enjoy the taste slowly. A cup of coffee to realx is able to beginning of the day happily.

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Hi there, Jane!

Coffee is life. I wonder how the Ethiopian coffee tastes like. I believe the aroma is inviting and the taste is even better. 

I love coffee too. Vietnamese coffee are not very sweet and aromatic as well. What would our lives be without a cup of coffee.

Thank you for your homework answer. As you can see from my suggestions, the use of "the" is important in describing a specific noun. 'Its' is used as a possessive adjective that you can use to enhance your second sentence. Finally, spelling also shows accuracy so make sure your words are properly spelled. Overall, you did a wonderful job expressing your ideas!

See you soon.

-T. Donna~

I like to drink coffee. A type of my favorite coffee is drip coffee. My favorite coffee bean is Ethiopian because of unique taste. Drip coffee smells good. I enjoy the taste slowly. A cup of coffee to realx is able to beginning of the day happily.
>> I like to drink coffee. A type of my favorite coffee is the drip coffee. My favorite coffee bean is Ethiopian because of its unique taste. Drip coffee smells good. I enjoy the taste by drinking it slowly. A cup of coffee to relax is able to begin the day happily.
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