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Where is your favorite restaurant? What makes it your favorite?

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Well, speaking of restaurants with brands, I like OutBack.
This is a popular family restaurant in Korea, and it is one of the most expensive restaurants. So, I visit there whenever something special happens.
This is a great place for couples to date and a great place for familes to go.
This is decorated with an antique interior design, which makes me feel like a very special person to eat in a special place and I love the atmosphere of the restaurant. In addition, the crew is kind and provides satisfactory service, and evne if it is expensive, it is worth a lot of money because it provides food as a course meal that gives appetizers, main dishes, and desserts.
My favorite dish among the restaurant's own is Toowoomba pasta and fried wing.
Toowoomba pasta is a spicy cream pasta and it is a popular menu at the restaurant. The fried wing is very crispy, so it's good to taste the delicious taste of chicken.

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Hi! 

Thank you so much for sharing about your favorite restaurant. 
It's nice to know that there is a restaurant you enjoy going to, especially during special occasions. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina



Well, speaking of restaurants with brands, I like OutBack.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: When it comes to branded restaurants, OutBack is my favorite.

This is a popular family restaurant in Korea, and it is one of the most expensive restaurants. 
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: It¡¯s a popular family restaurant in Korea and is considered one of the more expensive ones.

So, I visit there whenever something special happens.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: So, I usually go there when there¡¯s something special to celebrate.

This is a great place for couples to date and a great place for familes to go.
>> It¡¯s a great place for couples to go on dates and for families to enjoy meals together.

This is decorated with an antique interior design, which makes me feel like a very special person to eat in a special place and I love the atmosphere of the restaurant. 
>> The restaurant has an antique interior design that makes me feel like I¡¯m dining somewhere special. I really love the atmosphere.

In addition, the crew is kind and provides satisfactory service, and evne if it is expensive, it is worth a lot of money because it provides food as a course meal that gives appetizers, main dishes, and desserts.
>> Also, the staff are kind and provide excellent service. Even though it¡¯s expensive, it¡¯s worth the money because the meals include appetizers, main courses, and desserts.

My favorite dish among the restaurant's own is Toowoomba pasta and fried wing.
>> My favorite dishes at the restaurant are the Toowoomba pasta and the fried wings.

Toowoomba pasta is a spicy cream pasta and it is a popular menu at the restaurant. 
>> Toowoomba pasta is a spicy cream pasta and one of the most popular dishes on the menu.

The fried wing is very crispy, so it's good to taste the delicious taste of chicken.
>> The fried wings are very crispy, so you can really enjoy the delicious flavor of the chicken.
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