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What do you think is the worst job in the world and why?

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I think the worst job in the world is being a cyber wrecker.

First, they spread rumors without checking if they¡¯re true.
They just want to earn money and views.

Second, toxic rumors can lead to many innocent people getting hurt.

That¡¯s why I think being a cyber wrecker is the worst job.

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I think the worst job in the world is being a cyber wrecker.
First, they spread rumors without checking if they¡¯re true.
They just want to earn money and views.
>>> I think the worst job in the world is being a disinformation agent. They spread rumors without verifying them, driven only by the desire for money and views.

Second, toxic rumors can lead to many innocent people getting hurt.
>>> OR: Second, false narratives can cause harm to many innocent people.
>>> OR: Second, malicious rumors have the potential to inflict harm on many individuals who are completely innocent.

That¡¯s why I think being a cyber wrecker is the worst job.
>>> That¡¯s exactly why I think being a troll farm worker is the worst job there is.

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