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Cover of a book can be a factor of choosing book.

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2021-01-13 320

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Thank you for this Yun. Keep them coming. :D
- T. Beth
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I think the cover of a book is important because, it can be a factor to attract people to read it for several reasons. 
>>> correct   
When people decided to buy certain books, they go to the bookstore or look on the internet book shopping-mall. 
>>> When people have decided to buy certain books, they go to the bookstore or look in the internet book shopping-mall.    
Let’s suppose there are exactly same 3 books but with out the cover. 
>>> Let’s suppose there are exactly three similar books but without the cover.    
In this case, the cover of a book can be the important cause so to the person who tried to buy it. 
>>>  In this case, the cover of a book can be the important cause for the person to buy it.   
Or even if people didn’t chose the book to buy, the cover can also be the crucial factor of selecting books. 
>>> Or even if people didn’t chose the book to buy, the cover can also be the crucial factor for selecting books.   
They don’t have any information about book to chose, the cover which represents the title well and show attractive design can make people to look at it. 
>>> They don’t have any information about the book to chose, the cover which represents the title well and show attractive design can make people look at it.  
>>> OR: They don’t have any information about the book to chose, the cover which represents the title well and show attractive design can attract people.  
So it gives book a chance to be chosen. 
>>> correct
>>> OR: So it is more likely that people would choose that book.  
In another case, some fastidious people might have sufficient informations about the book they want to buy, include the contents, authors, and translator if that book is written by foreign writer. 
>>> In another case, some fastidious people might have sufficient information about the book they want to buy, including the contents, authors, and translator if that book is written by a foreign writer.    
It means there might be a dissatisfaction with the cover, nevertheless they will buy the books. 
>>> correct   
But in this case, if the cover is very strange but it re-released with beautifully renewal cover, this can give satisfaction and happiness to them. 
>>> In the case where the cover is very strange but it was re-produced with beautifully renewed cover, this can give satisfaction and happiness to them.    
So by this cases, I think the cover of a book is important point of choosing book for people.
>>>  So given these cases, I think the cover of a book is an important point of choosing book for people.

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