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Hi charry it\'s me Hyeri:)

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Hi charry ~ it's me !!

How are you today??

I have been sorry for you.. because these days I couldn't attend your class often.
I already know you spend hard time for your daddy
so I want to be with you every time but I couldn't because of my work.
I feel very sorry and sad
but I can see you are doing very well and brave
I want to hug you as a friend

actually I spend hard time either ...
so every Monday and Wednesday I want to see you and waiting for your call everytime
sometimes I feel like you are my best friend on line.
and go to your country for meeting you I will be soon.
plz be healthy and eat something ok?
always I pray for your family.
I believe you done well .
because you are charry
love you my friend

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Hi, Hye-Li! :)
How are you sweetie. We haven't talked in a while and I miss talking with you.
I really appreciate your kindness. I also feel that you are my best friend online. You understand my feelings so much and I am very thankful because you're there.
Don't worry about me. I will keep on being brave and strong. Be strong and brave too, okay?
I love you to the moon and back.
Take care always. :)
~Charry

Hi charry ~ it's me !!
>> Hi, Charry! It's me!
How are you today??
>>
How are you today?
I have been sorry for you.. because these days I couldn't attend your class often.
>> I have been feeling sorry for you because I couldn't attend your class these days.
I already know you spend hard time for your daddy
>> I already know that you are having a hard time because of your daddy.
so I want to be with you every time but I couldn't because of my work.
>> So, I want to be with you every time but I couldn't because of my work.
I feel very sorry and sad
>> I feel very sorry and sad.
but I can see you are doing very well and brave
>> But I can see that you are doing very well and you're very brave.
I want to hug you as a friend
>>
I want to hug you as a friend.
actually I spend hard time either ...
>> Actually, I am spending a hard time either.
so every Monday and Wednesday I want to see you and waiting for your call everytime
>> So, every Monday and Wednesday, I want to see you and I always wait for your call.
sometimes I feel like you are my best friend on line.
>> Sometimes, I feel like you are my best friend online.
and go to your country for meeting you I will be soon.
>> I will go to your country and meet you soon.
plz be healthy and eat something ok?
>> Please be healthy and eat something, okay?
always I pray for your family.
>> I always pray for your family.
I believe you done well .
>> I believe you have done well.
because you are charry
>> That's because you are Charry.
love you my friend
>> I love you my friend.
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