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What makes you happy?

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When I read the homework question, the first thing that came out was travelling. I love to go somewhere far from where I live and visit nature attractions or cultural places. I try to have a time to travel at least twice a year no matter how busy I am, once in spring and once in fall. Summer vacation is an option. In spring, I search for a city or country villages where I can enjoy blooming blossom. In fall, I usually go hiking to see trees turning into red and yellow. Taking pictures is also what makes me happy during the trip.
There are other things that also make me happy. Music, playing the flute, plants growing in my living room, and so on. My second best is playing the flute. But the pandemic in these days makes it hard to travel or play the flute with orchestra members. I wish our ordinary life would come back soon.

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Hi, Kylie!
Thank you so much for this.
I definitely agree with you~
I hope we'll live normally as soon as possible. ^^
Let's cheer up! ^^

- T. Rina


1. When I read the homework question, the first thing that came out was travelling. 
>> When I read the homework question, the first thing that came to my mind was traveling. 

2. I love to go somewhere far from where I live and visit nature attractions or cultural places. 
>> I love to go somewhere far from where I live and visit natural attractions or cultural places.

3. I try to have a time to travel at least twice a year no matter how busy I am, once in spring and once in fall. 
>> CORRECT!

4. Summer vacation is an option. 
>> CORRECT!

5.In spring, I search for a city or country villages where I can enjoy blooming blossom. 
>> CORRECT!

6. In fall, I usually go hiking to see trees turning into red and yellow. 
>> CORRECT!

7. Taking pictures is also what makes me happy during the trip.
>> CORRECT!

8. There are other things that also make me happy. 
>> CORRECT!

9. Music, playing the flute, plants growing in my living room, and so on. 
>> CORRECT!

10. My second best is playing the flute. 
>> CORRECT!

11. But the pandemic in these days makes it hard to travel or play the flute with orchestra members. 
>> But the pandemic these days makes it hard to travel or play the flute with orchestra members. 

12. I wish our ordinary life would come back soon.
>> I wish our ordinary lives would come back soon.
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