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When I hear the words ¡°Covid-19¡± I think about normal routine before the virus. We thought it is natural thing but it was not. We have to put on the masks for everyday and we are not allow to gather. World is changing because of the virus. So many people are spending hard time but I think it will left lesson.

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When I hear the words ¡°Covid-19¡± I think about normal routine before the virus. 
>>CORRECT

We thought it is natural thing but it was not. 
>> We thought that it was just a natural thing but it wasn't. 

We have to put on the masks for everyday and we are not allow to gather. 
>>CORRECT

World is changing because of the virus. 
>> The world is changing because of the virus. 

So many people are spending hard time but I think it will left lesson.
>> Many people are having a hard time but it will go away very soon.
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