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Can you tell me about a time when you didn’t have much time but still had to finish many tasks? How

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I had experiences like this situation you mentioned at my previous companies.
When I had many tasks to finish within work time, I had appointment with client outside.
Usually, I enjoyed having appointment on the outside, but that moment I was very nervous and worried for many task I wasn't done. After the meeting, I came back in office and then recognized the status. For finishing these task, firstly, I figured out and distinguish priority and second I checked due date what is more urgent. Though I didn't have a time to rest short time, It was okay, because I preferred to finish tasks for my satisfaction. At that moment, I imagined if I couldn't that how I dealed with the situation, maybe I couldn't understand myself, for preventing realizing my imagine, I have to focus and try to complete tasks.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Gloria,

You did a wonderful job expressing a very relatable experience. It's clear that you're responsible and committed to doing your best, even under pressure. Your story shows that you're a person who values time and personal satisfaction, and your ability to reflect on your emotions during a difficult situation is very impressive. You stayed focused, you prioritized, and you kept going until everything was done, that takes inner strength.

To make your story even clearer next time, try to tell it step by step, like you're guiding someone through the moment with you. Start with when and where it happened, then explain what challenge you faced, how you felt, and what actions you took to handle it. Then, end with what you learned or how it made you feel after.

But overall, you should be proud of this response. Keep sharing your experiences with this much honesty. You're growing every time you do.

~Teacher Cathy

 

I had experiences like this situation you mentioned at my previous companies.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I've had similar experiences at my previous companies.

When I had many tasks to finish within work time, I had appointment with client outside.

>>When I had many tasks to finish during work hours, I also had an appointment with a client outside the office.

Usually, I enjoyed having appointment on the outside, but that moment I was very nervous and worried for many task I wasn't done.

>>Usually, I enjoyed having appointments outside, but at that moment, I was very nervous and worried because I hadn't finished many of my tasks.

After the meeting, I came back in office and then recognized the status.

>>After the meeting, I came back to the office and assessed the situation.

For finishing these task, firstly, I figured out and distinguish priority and second I checked due date what is more urgent.

>>To complete the tasks, I first identified and prioritized them. Then, I checked the due dates to see which ones were more urgent.

Though I didn't have a time to rest short time, It was okay, because I preferred to finish tasks for my satisfaction.

>>Even though I didn’t have time to take a break, it was okay because I preferred to finish my tasks for my own satisfaction.

At that moment, I imagined if I couldn't that how I dealed with the situation, maybe I couldn't understand myself, for preventing realizing my imagine, I have to focus and try to complete tasks.

>>At that moment, I imagined what would happen if I couldn’t complete everything. I thought I might not be able to understand or forgive myself. To prevent that from happening, I stayed focused and did my best to complete all the tasks.

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